Friday, May 7, 2010

The Mother Tree








Winner of the BlogAdda Mother’s Day contest May 2010




Some say
a new star appears
in the sky
gazing down
in benevolence...
But
now,
no longer
with us,
she is more
the Banyan tree
rooted firmly
in my yard,
in her native Earth....



Gnarled wisdom trunk
rising up
spreading in
green protection
across her children,
and their children,
and new roots,
the earthy sensible sap
absorbed and disseminated
a bit here,
a little more there,
a fine balance
amidst
various willful branches,
some old,
some carefree,
some troubled, and some new.

An understanding shelter
in life storms,
restful shade
on a burning day,
a conspiratory wink
as the neighbor ladies
wound the sacred thread
around her torso
celebrating Vatapurnima;
Bending hugely,
indulging grand kids
swinging
on her,
a glare at
a daughter
trying to impose
her avoirdupois
on a hanging root...

She isn't gone,
and she doesn't need a Day;
She stands,
brave ,
in the wind,
with her young and old,
gathered
in her folds,
a virtual hand
reassuringly resting
and patting
the troubled shoulder,
of someone,
for whom,
everyday,
in Life
is Mother's Day....


Submitted for the BlogAdda Mothers Day Contest 2010 : Selected as one of the 5 winners.(May 14)



16 comments:

  1. Beautiful poetry Ugich :)
    Loved it :)

    Best wishes for the contest :D

    Cheers!!

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  2. very beautifully penned...the analogy between a mother and banyan tree is sheer delight...

    All the best for the contest..

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  3. Wow..Loved your writing!!
    Happy Mother's Day!

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  4. Wow!!! I wish I age to be as wonderful a thinker as you :D...

    All the best :)

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  5. Lovely poem!
    Very true that 'She isnt gone and she doesnt need a day'...

    Best wishes for the contest!

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  6. A wonderful post! :)

    -
    PS: http://tiny.cc/10fuckups - 10 ways to live life!

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  7. Beautiful poetry for the wonderful mother. Certainly deserve to be the winner.

    Congrats to you !!! You seem to be on the roll...That book and now, this....WOW, my hugs to you !!! :)

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  8. Someone's on a roll! Congrats... Wow! Am so happy for you

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  9. She isn't gone,
    and she doesn't need a Day;
    She stands,
    brave ,
    in the wind,
    with her young and old,
    gathered
    in her folds,
    a virtual hand
    reassuringly resting
    and patting
    the troubled shoulder,

    just amazing.What an apt analogy!

    I agree every day is mother's day:)

    Congratulations. Beautifully woven.

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  10. Chatterbox Thank you ! I guess your wishes worked !

    lazy Pineapple Thank you, and Congratulations to you !

    Sandhya Thank you !

    Sagarika Its a bit alarming to be told that "you are on a roll" when you are my size :-) but thank you for your
    wonderful wishes and encouragement ...

    Priya Thank you.

    Virgin Author Thank you.

    UmaS Thank you. And like I told Sagarika above, I am a bit alarmed at the mention of rolling ...:-) Appreciate your wishes !

    Indyeah You know that was the first analogy that came to mind, when I thought of my Mother...wish she could have seen this, and all the wishes of my blogger friends... Thank you !

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  11. Lovely analogy, beautifully put in words :)
    Congrats Suranga .. u deserve it so much :)

    Bending hugely,
    indulging grand kids
    swinging
    on her,
    a glare at
    a daughter
    trying to impose
    her avoirdupois
    on a hanging root...

    - I luved this lines. Can picture 3 gens together so well :)

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  12. Beautiful piece of poetry.The last stanza especially made a place for itself somewhere in the deepest corner of my heart....
    Indeed everyday is a mother's day for those of us who are lucky enough to have the presence of our mothers in our lives.
    Congratulations! :))

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  13. Swaram Thank you !

    Samadrita Thank you !

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  14. Congratulations.

    Your years of wisdom and compassion have beautifully distilled into the poem! Lovely analogy!

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  15. Sandhya Thank you !

    Sucharita Thank you. Though some folks have issues with the "wisdom" part .....:-)

    But that was the only analogy that came to mind...when I was thinking about the poem ....

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