Some say a new star appears in the sky gazing down in benevolence... But now, no longer with us, she is more the Banyan tree rooted firmly in my yard, in her native Earth....
Gnarled wisdom trunk rising up spreading in green protection across her children, and their children, and new roots, the earthy sensible sap absorbed and disseminated a bit here, a little more there, a fine balance amidst various willful branches, some old, some carefree, some troubled, and some new.
An understanding shelter in life storms, restful shade on a burning day, a conspiratory wink as the neighbor ladies wound the sacred thread around her torso celebrating Vatapurnima; Bending hugely, indulging grand kids swinging on her, a glare at a daughter trying to impose her avoirdupois on a hanging root...
She isn't gone, and she doesn't need a Day; She stands, brave , in the wind, with her young and old, gathered in her folds, a virtual hand reassuringly resting and patting the troubled shoulder, of someone, for whom, everyday, in Life is Mother's Day....
She isn't gone, and she doesn't need a Day; She stands, brave , in the wind, with her young and old, gathered in her folds, a virtual hand reassuringly resting and patting the troubled shoulder, just amazing.What an apt analogy!
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Sagarika Its a bit alarming to be told that "you are on a roll" when you are my size :-) but thank you for your wonderful wishes and encouragement ...
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UmaS Thank you. And like I told Sagarika above, I am a bit alarmed at the mention of rolling ...:-) Appreciate your wishes !
Indyeah You know that was the first analogy that came to mind, when I thought of my Mother...wish she could have seen this, and all the wishes of my blogger friends... Thank you !
Beautiful piece of poetry.The last stanza especially made a place for itself somewhere in the deepest corner of my heart.... Indeed everyday is a mother's day for those of us who are lucky enough to have the presence of our mothers in our lives. Congratulations! :))
Beautiful poetry Ugich :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
Best wishes for the contest :D
Cheers!!
very beautifully penned...the analogy between a mother and banyan tree is sheer delight...
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest..
Wow..Loved your writing!!
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day!
Wow!!! I wish I age to be as wonderful a thinker as you :D...
ReplyDeleteAll the best :)
Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteVery true that 'She isnt gone and she doesnt need a day'...
Best wishes for the contest!
A wonderful post! :)
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Beautiful poetry for the wonderful mother. Certainly deserve to be the winner.
ReplyDeleteCongrats to you !!! You seem to be on the roll...That book and now, this....WOW, my hugs to you !!! :)
Someone's on a roll! Congrats... Wow! Am so happy for you
ReplyDeleteShe isn't gone,
ReplyDeleteand she doesn't need a Day;
She stands,
brave ,
in the wind,
with her young and old,
gathered
in her folds,
a virtual hand
reassuringly resting
and patting
the troubled shoulder,
just amazing.What an apt analogy!
I agree every day is mother's day:)
Congratulations. Beautifully woven.
Chatterbox Thank you ! I guess your wishes worked !
ReplyDeletelazy Pineapple Thank you, and Congratulations to you !
Sandhya Thank you !
Sagarika Its a bit alarming to be told that "you are on a roll" when you are my size :-) but thank you for your
wonderful wishes and encouragement ...
Priya Thank you.
Virgin Author Thank you.
UmaS Thank you. And like I told Sagarika above, I am a bit alarmed at the mention of rolling ...:-) Appreciate your wishes !
Indyeah You know that was the first analogy that came to mind, when I thought of my Mother...wish she could have seen this, and all the wishes of my blogger friends... Thank you !
Lovely analogy, beautifully put in words :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats Suranga .. u deserve it so much :)
Bending hugely,
indulging grand kids
swinging
on her,
a glare at
a daughter
trying to impose
her avoirdupois
on a hanging root...
- I luved this lines. Can picture 3 gens together so well :)
Beautiful piece of poetry.The last stanza especially made a place for itself somewhere in the deepest corner of my heart....
ReplyDeleteIndeed everyday is a mother's day for those of us who are lucky enough to have the presence of our mothers in our lives.
Congratulations! :))
Swaram Thank you !
ReplyDeleteSamadrita Thank you !
Congratulations!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations.
ReplyDeleteYour years of wisdom and compassion have beautifully distilled into the poem! Lovely analogy!
Sandhya Thank you !
ReplyDeleteSucharita Thank you. Though some folks have issues with the "wisdom" part .....:-)
But that was the only analogy that came to mind...when I was thinking about the poem ....